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Ma correction mais c'est les formulations qui gênent plus que l'orthographe.

"The defense wishes to remind the jurors of Yukiko Watanabe's journey. She's was born fatherless in China without a father because her mother was probably raped during the Nanjing massacre during the Second World War.
Her mother decided to leave Nanjing for the capital, but she was unable to create a new life there, and became homeless.

She succumbed to an illness, leaving her daughter an orphan. Ms. Watanabe grew up on the streets and as a teenager became a prostitute as a teenager to insure ensure her survival.

Then she was adopted by a rich Japanese client, Shinichi Watanabe who decided to take brought her with him to Japan. He died in 1956 and Yukiko Watanabe took over his business.
A woman who, despite life's challenges, has adeptly seized the opportunities essential for her fulfilment fullfilment.

I'm not seeking sympathy from you, esteemed members of the jury. Instead, I'm underlining that a woman who has overcome such hurdles couldn't possibly harbor ill intentions."
LES AMIS !! Y'a aussi la première partie à adapter ! La voici:

"Mr. Judge, gentlemen, ladies of the jury, good morning. Today we are trying Mrs. Yukiko Watanabe who is accused, after an investigation, of exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region. Sites which, I remind you, would be a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an element which is part of the composition of nuclear weapons among other things. I also remind you that Ms. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong regime, probably because of her Chinese origins and that the latter financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China."
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MeeMs
MeeMs
2 ans
Aider le régime chinois à avoir l'arme nucléaire en les fournissant en lithium en exploitant des ouighours dans les montagnes de l'himalaya.
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J'espère que t'es noté surtout sur l'orthographe et pas sur la plaidoirie parce que la elle va finir à Guantanamo clé
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il y a 2 ans
J'espère que t'es noté surtout sur l'orthographe et pas sur la plaidoirie parce que la elle va finir à Guantanamo clé
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Bah après ça elle déclenche la fin du monde donc osef
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(C'est pour un projet musical by the way)
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MeeMs
MeeMs
2 ans
*MAJ* Le texte ci dessous est un autre texte qu'il faudrait m'aider à corriger svp
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"Mr. Judge, gentlemen, ladies of the jury, good morning. Today we are trying Mrs. Yukiko Watanabe who is accused, after an investigation, of exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region. Sites which, I remind you, would be a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an element which is part of the composition of nuclear weapons among other things. I also remind you that Ms. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong regime, probably because of her Chinese origins and that the latter financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China."
J'ai modifié le first, il faudrait m'aider à corriger ce nouveau texte
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The yes needs the no to win, against the no
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Désactiver les signatures : Mon profil/modifier/apparence
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MeeMs
MeeMs
2 ans
LES AMIS !! Y'a aussi la première partie à adapter ! La voici:

"Mr. Judge, gentlemen, ladies of the jury, good morning. Today we are trying Mrs. Yukiko Watanabe who is accused, after an investigation, of exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region. Sites which, I remind you, would be a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an element which is part of the composition of nuclear weapons among other things. I also remind you that Ms. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong regime, probably because of her Chinese origins and that the latter financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China."
"Mr. Judge, gentlemen and ladies of the jury, good morning me and my partners are very glad that the jury's took the time to look at the case of Mrs Yukiko Watabane. Today we are trying Mrs. Watanabe who is accused, Mrs Watabane after an investigation from (qui fait l'enquête?) is facing human trafficking charges, of by exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in at her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region province. Sites which, I remind you supposedly, would be were used as a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an a crutial element which is part of the composition involved in the production of nuclear weapons and weapons of mass destruction among other things. I will also remind the jury that Mrs. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong Xi Jinping regime and the PCC, probably because of her Chinese origins descent and we have proofs that the latter regime financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China the Chinese government ."
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"Mr. Judge, gentlemen and ladies of the jury, good morning me and my partners are very glad that the jury's took the time to look at the case of Mrs Yukiko Watabane. Today we are trying Mrs. Watanabe who is accused, Mrs Watabane after an investigation from (qui fait l'enquête?) is facing human trafficking charges, of by exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in at her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region province. Sites which, I remind you supposedly, would be were used as a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an a crutial element which is part of the composition involved in the production of nuclear weapons and weapons of mass destruction among other things. I will also remind the jury that Mrs. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong Xi Jinping regime and the PCC, probably because of her Chinese origins descent and we have proofs that the latter regime financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China the Chinese government ."
C'est toi le fameux bilingue américain qui corrigeait les fautes de tout le monde ?
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Cela est arrivé
:Jesus_Christ:
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C'est toi le fameux bilingue américain qui corrigeait les fautes de tout le monde ?
:onch:
Inconnu au bataillon
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Inconnu au bataillon
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Ah, je parlais de JohnDoes, ou 500, ou bien encore Vor
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Cela est arrivé
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Sinon t'as chat GPT
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Ah, je parlais de JohnDoes, ou 500, ou bien encore Vor
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My client got nothing to hide. Mr SKUD_SKUNK only operate under one username until he eventually get banned wich is not possible because onche.org is bound to the first amendment of the constitution.
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"Mr. Judge, gentlemen and ladies of the jury, good morning me and my partners are very glad that the jury's took the time to look at the case of Mrs Yukiko Watabane. Today we are trying Mrs. Watanabe who is accused, Mrs Watabane after an investigation from (qui fait l'enquête?) is facing human trafficking charges, of by exploiting Uighur labor in an inhumane manner in at her black and pink salt extraction sites in the Himalayan region province. Sites which, I remind you supposedly, would be were used as a facade to hide the massive extraction of lithium, an a crutial element which is part of the composition involved in the production of nuclear weapons and weapons of mass destruction among other things. I will also remind the jury that Mrs. Watanabe is very close to the Mao Zedong Xi Jinping regime and the PCC, probably because of her Chinese origins descent and we have proofs that the latter regime financed this gigantic charade. In an era of nuclear arms race, allow us to doubt the intentions of Ms. Watanabe and China the Chinese government ."
Merci tu gères. Je garde juste Mao parce que l'histoire se déroule dans les années 50 haha
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MeeMs
MeeMs
2 ans
Merci tu gères. Je garde juste Mao parce que l'histoire se déroule dans les années 50 haha
De rien crayon
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